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Izzie



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PostSubject: Re: Anyway :(   Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:51 am

When there’s no point to this, anyway,
And my longings aren’t real, anyway
And we’re just friends, only friends, anyway,

When we’re only emailing, anyway,
And it’s simple business, anyway,
And it doesn’t matter, anyway,

When it’s just a regular old Tuesday,
And it’s ordinary talk, anyway,
And there’s nothing special, anyway,

You take a while to respond,
Shamelessly

And my heart skips a beat or two,
Restlessly

And I sit there waiting, waiting
Breathlessly

For a few letters typed out
Thoughtlessly

On your white keyboard at home
Mindlessly,

When it really is quite acutely clear to me

That we are not “just friends,” anyway,
And it’s not just business, anyway,
And it really does matter, anyway…

When I need to end this any way
And need an out of it any way
And I say goodnight ‘cuz it’s the only way

I hurt.
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PostSubject: Re: Re: Anyway :(   Wed Mar 25, 2009 2:30 pm

This is still the most amazing poem i have ever read.
It feels almost like you are reading emotion and not words, as cheesy as that sounds.
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PostSubject: Re: Re: Anyway :(   Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:06 pm

"It feels almost like you are reading emotion and not words..." ^^ You have no idea how much that means to me.
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